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Training or just an opportunity? (complete)

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I woke up feeling fully rested. It felt good to finally get some good sleep on a mattress and not in a cockpit. Plus it was nice to relax after the torment I went through. I sat up and noticed a piece of paper by door. Someone slipped it under my door last night. I was worried to read it. I figured it might be a note from one of the three sisters....wanting to tickle me. I walked over and picked it up, nervous not wanting to read it. It said

"Dear recruit,

You've proven yourself to me that you have what it takes to be one of us
Catching sliky really impressed everyone around here..well almost everyone.
I'd like to start training you right away.
I'll be in the gym
shouldn't be to hard to find.

                      See you there,
                                  Samus Aran"

My heart nearly stopped when I read who it was from. I was even more excited when I found out my training was going to start today. I quickly got ready and got my zero suit on and rushed out.

It took me a while to find the gym, I had to ask for directions a few times. I found it and entered. It was a training course I saw Samus in the middle of the room. I took a shaky breath and walked over. She looked over at me "Ah you made it! You ready?" She asked. "We're gonna start already?" I asked. She turned to me, her hands on her hips "Yes! We gotta get you ready in case you get called on a mission. After you caught sliky everyone expects better of you and we didn't even start your training yet! Not let's go!" She said.

We got started immediately. Running over things, crawling, and lifting up things. I didn't do so bad....hey i'd give myself at least a D for trying. But I saw the look on Samus face....she wasnt to happy. She did this stuff with ease. Ran right through it leaving me in the dust. It only got worse when we got to the climbing wall. I climbed up no problem...even though I was slighty behind Samus. She grabbed the rope and slid down and waited for me. I guess I took a bad step or something....I fell. I shouted and shut my eyes, preparing to hit the floor. Nothing. I opened one eye and saw I was dangling above the floor. I looked at Samus who looked pretty shocked. I looked down and saw that I was tangled up in the rope. "Oh would you look at that..." I said. "That was way to close...now come on untangle yourself and let's get back to training." Samus said. I swung myself a little and squirmed trying to get free but...."uhh Samus...I can't." I said. "Your stuck?" She asked. I nodded. I was wrapped up pretty good. "Come on quit messing around.' She said. I wiggled a little but I made myself swing forward and hit my face on the climbing wall. "owwwwa!" I shouted. Samus put a hand over her mouth and laughed a little. I dangled a little, slowly turning around and facing her. "A little help?" I asked. She walked over and examined me. She grabbed me and shook me wildly. Didn't make much of a difference. "Your tied up real good..." Samus said. "Yeah so I noticed..." I grumbled. Samus thought it over then had an idea. "I think I know a way to get you down." She said. "How?" I asked. "We just gotta wiggle you out of it." She said. "I've been doing that!" I said. "So I noticed but I mean you just gotta...ugh! it's hard to explain...!" She said. "What do you suppose I do?" I asked. "I don't know about you...but I think I got an idea..." Samus said. "Do tell..." I said. She didn't answer. Soon I felt her squeezing my sides making me laugh. "Sahahahahamus?! what are yohohou dohohing?!" I asked. "Tickling." She said. "Well knock it off! AHHH! hahahahaa!! I can't stand it!" I said. She groaned in frustration and stepped back, crossing her arms "What do you suppose we do then?" She asked. I was silent. She shrugged and turned around "fine. dangle there until your blood rushes to your head and kills you." She said walking away. "Wait! Samus!" I called after her. She stopped. I sighed "Fine...just...go easy on me ok?" I asked. She had a grin on her face "Oh don't worry I will" She said before turning around.


She examined me for a bit. The suspense was killing me. "Hurry up already!" I said. "Ok you know what...let's try something else..." She said. I was relieved thinking I just dodged a bullet. I wasnt gonna get tickled. "Like what?" I asked. Silence. But I heard a noise...like something walking on top of something made of wood. I heard wooden footsteps above me. 'Uh...Samus?" I called out. I felt someting tug on my boots. My eyes widened "wait wait WAIT! Hold on a second! Dont go there!" I shouted to her as she tugged off both my boots tossing them on a floor. "Well what do you think we should try? I think it'll be better to tickle you most sensitive spot. It'll make you squirm and you'll wiggle yourself free. I've seen the sisters tickle you, I see how you get being tickled there." I blushed a little. I felt her fingers wiggle on my socked feet. I was already laughing "Hahahaha! I don't like this plan!" I said. "Your gonna have to deal with it...let's consider this part of the training. Endurance." She said as I saw my socks fall down in front of me. "Uhhh...Samus? What are you do-IHIHIING!?!?! HAHAHAHAHA!!!" I felt her fingers wiggle around my soles. "STOHOHOHOHOP!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!" I beg as I wiggled my toes. "Then get yourself out!" She stopped for and looked down at me. "I cant! Does it look like I can?!" I said. "Fine then i'll continue until you get out." She said. Her tickling picked up again and so did my laughter. I swung a little bit but I didnt get out. She took her two index fingers and made circles on my soles making my feet twitch. She stopped and rested her chin on her hands looking at my feet trying to come up with how to make it worse. Her ponytail slid over her shoulder. She looked at it and grinned getting an idea.

     I dangled there, trying to look up at her. "Samus what are you doing? Are you going to get me out of this?!" I called up to her. The tickling picked back up. I felt her fingers on my left foot but something else on my right foot. She tickled my left foot with one hand while tickling my right foot with her hair. She waved it up and down my sole while she stroked the side of her pony tail side to side on my arch. "HAHAHAHAHA SAHAHAHAMUS PLEHEHEHEASE STOP!!" I shouted up to her as my laughter continued. "Then get yourself out!" She said not stopping her tickle assault. "I CAHAHAHAHAHANT!!! JUST STOHOHOHOP!!!" I said as I laughed. "Then i'm going to continue!" She said the tickling not letting up. I wiggled my feet as much as I could but I couldnt escape her tickling. She was actually enjoying herself. She had a little smile on her face as she listened to my laughter.

This went on for thirty more minutes before finally stopping. She rested her chin on her hands again, still smiling. "Ready to get yourself out yet?" She asked. I was panting, catching my breath "Buh-bite me...!" I said. "Oh dont be like that! Tell you what. Let's make this part of your test! Test of endurance!" She giggled to herself. "I just want to get out of this!" I said. "Then go ahead. go" She said. "I. CANT!!" I snapped getting frustrated. "Well alright then." She smirked and thought about what to do next. She looked at my defenseless soles for a bit. She had a idea and her face lit up. "Oh I know a way to get you down." She chuckled scooting forward, her head over my feet.

"Why not just cut me down?" I asked. "Nah to easy. I'm testing your endurance!" She said. "Oh come on Samus PLEASE just get me out of this!" She smiled "Alright...let's see if you can endure THIS!" I soon felt something slimy go up and down my feet. It tickled SO much. Tears formed in my eyes as I burst into laughter. I started squirming the best I could. "NOOO HAHAHAH SAHAHAHAMUS!!! STOP IT!!! PLEASE!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHA HEHEHE NOHOHO STAHAHAHAP! KNOHOHOHOCK IT OHOHOHOHOFF!" I laughed. She held my right foot still, flicking her tongue up and down my entire foot. She was REALLY enjoying herself. I started to swing left to right as I continued to laugh. I tried my best to escape but to know avail. "HAHAHAHHAA STOP PLEHEHEHEASE NO MORE!!! I CANT TAKE IT!! I FAIL I FAHAHAHAIL! JUST STOHOHOHOHP!!!" I begged. She stopped for a moment "hmmm...nah!" Grabbing my other foot after licking all over the right one. She stuck out her tongue and dragged up from my heel, slowly up my sole. She moaned as she licked. She reached my arch then put my big toe in her mouth. I felt her suck for a little bit before nibbling. I was crying, my cheeks covered in tears. I couldn't breathe.

              She began sucking on each toe. She took her time as she suck, two minutes on each toe. When she finished she did the same to my right foot. It wasn't THAT bad but I giggled a little. Samus wanted to hear me laugh so she'd nibble every now and then getting me to laugh a little. She eventually sucked on all my toes and went back to licking my feet. I couldn't stand it. I was swinging and squirming. My face was red, cheeks covered in tears, and I was constantly begging her to stop. I had NO idea how long this has been going on. But eventually My swinging and squirming gets me free and I fall to the floor, luckily wasn't that high up but I still hurt my head. Samus frowned kinda disappointed that it was over. She jumped down and looked down at me. I looked up, she had a smug look on her face. "I knew you could of gotten yourself out." She said. "Sorry to ruin your fun. You could of just cut me down or something." I said. "It's part of the training course anyway. I'm not paying for replacements." I frowned "Uh huh sure..." She chuckled "So I'm guessing I failed?" I asked. She shook her head "Nah I think you did alright." She said. I raised an eyebrow "But I was begging the whole time." I said. "But you didn't pass out." I wipped the tears off my face "So what do I get?" I asked. "What you want a trophie? Maybe a gold medal? Don't get so sure of yourself. It was only tickling." She laughed. I frowned "Oh good out of all that nothing..." She smiled "Well I wouldn't say that." She walked up to me. She put her hands on my shoulders and bent over and pecked my cheek. She leaned over and whispered in my ear (Which tickled a little) "I did have a little fun." And with that she walked away. I watched her go with a shocked look on my face, a hand on my cheek where she kissed it. I was beginning to like my job here.

We both sat in our rooma, thinking about what just happened....however our thoughts werent really the same. Mine were on her thinking about the kiss. She was thinking about the torment she gave me, asking herself did she really just lick feet and.....like it?  I however fell asleep a happy man....knowing little she fell asleep with a smile on her face
                                 
Just a sequel to the bounty hunter rival. This was based on a rp I did with someone who wants to remain anonmyous a long time ago. I decided to make a series out of it. I have a HUGE crush on Samus aran so.... 
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NShep98's avatar
I think it's a pretty good story. For one though, Samus mentions the "test of endurance" thing twice. Also, I cannot stress enough how much easier it is to tell who is speaking when if you indent after each new speaker. You can cut out a lot of "he said/she said"s that way too.